Is there enough of to much leniency?Is humiliation enough? How do their attorneys argue they don’t deserve the sentence (besides money)?
1. I have and exiting intro but I don’t know if its long enough?
2. Background, Ive got lots of it but how do I make it interesting/
3. Opposing side, I have hardly anything (weakest page)
4. Side I prove is right (strongest page)
5. Closing
I need some help!! IF YOU CAN PLEASE ATTACH A SOURCE. ~Thanks!!!


